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that makes more sense than the world,
maybe if some changes are made.
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just put them together,
those odd strange figures.

will dipping them in paint,
change their colors ?

if we look differently,
will their shapes change?

Just put them together,
Those odd strange figures.

turn them around,
reflect them in a mirror,
add what you want,
will they ever differ ?

dip them in gravy,
mix some in salsa,
add a pinch of salt and some sugar.
will they ever differ ?

just put them together,
those odd strange figures.

stretch them with pliars,
cut some into halves,
scrpe some with sandpaper.
throw some mud over them,
decorate some with flowers,
clean and polish the others.
will they ever differ ?

just put them together,
those odd strange figures

....

gather them randomly,
put them in a blender,
they'll change alright,
maybe even together,
Maybe for the better.
it's what i think.

what do you ? ..
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Daily Deviation

Given 2001-12-30
abstract politician soup by rajivmathur is a truly original and well composed work. The poet begins abstractly and builds to an elegant thoughtful ending. Wonderful x 9! Selected by `faithwalker. ( Featured by devart )
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EsebeiDoran Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
So this was the first Daily Deviation? Coolness!
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Sakkeru Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2011  Student General Artist
This was the first DD?
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rajivmathur Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2011
mine? Not sure =)
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Sakkeru Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2011  Student General Artist
I can't find any before this date~
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Sakkeru Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2011  Student General Artist
Because that would be so cool.
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quietlyintheshadows Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2011
this is really nice and very original~! wonderful job! :D
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rajivmathur Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2011
thanks
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DanteDeRycke Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2008
This is incredible!
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rajivmathur Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2008
many thanks!
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thraxy Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2002
if you hadn't composed this poem so amazingly, would my feelings towards this poem differ? no. great job well done... a complete word trip... with out any gas money. reading this was an adventure, i loved it all.

Aloha, Hello And Goodbye
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